Monday, April 2, 2007

obituary

Samantha Linder, 79 years old, passed away yesterday April 1st 2057. Samantha entered into eternal rest yesterday when she was found in her bed. She went to take a nap earlier that day and never woke up. She was the daughter of Anita and Daniel Linder and sister of Brittany Linder. Samantha was a well know doctor in the Charleston area. She was known for her enthusiasm and love for her job. She saved many lives and we all know that everyone is forever thankful to everything she has done. Samantha will be missed greatly.

2 comments:

E. O. P. said...

Good that you put the factual sentences in one paragraph and the emotional, feeling type sentences in another paragraph.

E. O. P. said...

Appealed to pathos. Did well in writing for a particular audience.